Wednesday, March 3, 2010

she


She too is a teen…’n
Not so that she…anew..
Nor even in an Hovel..
Pure in the street she born..
Still beneath a shade..
In the same street.. ‘n
Exposed to rain ‘n roar ’n
Bloody Humans….

And the same creatures…
Enmeshed her..’n
Entombed her Virginity..’n
Expunged her smile…
The fat one crushed her lips..’n
The pervert; en-wrapped hips…
The other grabbed her frock..’n
The other.., frizzed her hair…

And when one, zipped trousers..,
Threw some coins…
And the other.. had her a bit..
‘n gave a cloth to survive..

Still she lives… beneath shade..
With another Life..’n
Perturbed mind…
By feeding the life of anonymous…

And.. When night creeps…
Still the shadows come up…
To crush again ‘n again…
The Glorified Humans..!!

Image Courtesy:- Baristanet.

14 comments:

  1. Females are the most beautiful creations ever!.
    They are doomed because of that only!.Thats why mishaps happening in their life!.
    I would say this particular post is a sincere effort that reflects what i meant!.

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  2. + 1 to Anil TG,I must say that you have well said the facts that i was about to say.

    and yes, from what I have learnt from the past 15 years of life,it all starts from the genitals.Yup, i did mean that men kills and rapes 'XX of the Species' for pleasure,what not -'sex'.

    The 'rapes' and things of that sort, dates back to the ages when the concepts of Chastity and Virginity were composed.Yes,women are prisoners of their of their own body and chastity.

    For instance, according to what i have read There was a time in which Aluminium was a way more expensive than Gold and men used to fight and kill to get it.It's because there was no way to extract it.Similarly Women are raped not for the beauty of their genitals, but for their rarity.

    Having said that, it's a high time for the whole world to think up and act upon to eradicate these kinda unholy happenings.

    and I do believe the face of a beautiful lady is far, far more beautiful than her genital.

    Amith

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  3. @Anil.

    Exactly..!! Females are the beautiful creations ever..!! And may be the same, be responsible for the mishaps.. The humans are creeping them for their pleasure..!!

    Thanks a lot for your compliment which gives me an immense confidence that I've done something good for Women..!!

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  4. @ Amith.

    I'm very much pleased hear your sincere comments..!

    And i too have the same opinion that, Women are the most rare creations of God..! It might be because of a woman's soft mind & exalted honor or glory..making The men trying to conquer her virginity in all aspects..!!

    And in fact, I'm thankful to you very much for giving me hug for this Scribbling..!!

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  5. @Kailas & @Lady

    Thanking you brilliant people for spending your quality time here..!!

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  6. wel....tats a gud 1....nd i agree wit ur each nd every lyn......(well...even m a gal teen)
    keep on da gud work......

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  7. @ Chikku & @ Emmanuel

    Pleased with you people..!!

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  8. Yes.
    Its really excruciating to know the terrific life ventures faced by females- The Core of Life.

    Keep blogging.

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  9. Friends,

    The problem is not with girls or they are rare. The problem is whith the society. This disease should be cured by the actions of young men like us.
    I really appreciate sree for notifing such a problem through his poem. A writer/blogger should write against such disease of the society and then only it can be cured. Your blog is an inspiration for me in that and i may too start to right something like that....

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  10. @ Rajeel.

    Thanks a lot for your quality time being here..! And yes, there are several other cancerous diseases growing in this dark crept world..!!

    Best Wishes for your decision of creating a new blog, and i'm glad that My Scribblings are the inspiration for you to do so..!

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