Wednesday, March 10, 2010

lives untold

I penned down this, just with a heavy heart & breathless mind.. The other day, I was being in a school named "Mercy" which we cannibals call as "School for Mentally Retarded Children" or I would say, "Asylum of Mischief by The Almighty"

..let my tears.. not bleed my words..!!...

The board reads "Mercy"..'n
Yes, for the sake of converse..
Maze leads to meadow..of
utter mishaps 'n grieve..

Came a lad to greet me..
drooling with slaver..which
was his bouquet to me..;
took that as a pretender..

Stole my hands in his..;'n
shared his lunch to me..!!
Rushed others, ; insane..
What they quoth My rescue.

Then my eyes bit a kid..'n
my words hit anew him..
Nor turned or listened..but,
was muttering to infinite..
Image Courtesy:-Buddham's Web Blog
Could see a girl chortling-
all the while..'n her-
laugh had pushed her
teeth a bit.. apart..;
Saw a lady aside..alive..
as a drizzle of tear..
Who clutched her gravely..
The Womb she slept..

Bedaubed his face, came a boy.
to embrace me... Blocked
a man by what he -
called "Bedraggled Boy"

'n so as to bleed me..
Saw some cannibals again.;
Striving hard to click..
these rare creatures..

Staring eyes wounded me..
but nor them..'cos
don't know Humans 'nor
The Devils Alive..!!
Tell me ; Whom to blame..??
Warmth of Womb..??
Hands of God..??
Or my Organ of Sense..??

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13 comments:

  1. Vandana MenonMarch 11, 2010 at 2:29 AM

    m happy 2 b da follower of tis blog....
    a gud 1.....
    :D

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  2. sreeMarch 16, 2010 at 9:35 PM

    @Chikku

    Thanks a lot for your time being here..!!

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  3. AmithMarch 19, 2010 at 12:19 AM

    Yup, you really deserve a standing ovation.!! I must say you've taken a great initiative here.Btw, i hope that this post might help our fellow companions to gift at least a true and innocent smile to these 'differentially abled children'

    In the interim, I gotta admit the true fact that - 'I didn't understand all the lines that you have penned down here'.Moreover i had to flip the pages of my dictionary to make out what you had really meant.

    That's just my two cents. You are welcome to differ.

    aMiTh

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  4. sreeMarch 19, 2010 at 12:30 AM

    @ Amith

    Thanks for your time here..!!

    And I cant make out Why you people say that I'm making massive things..!

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  5. the ladyMarch 21, 2010 at 10:06 PM

    Awesome !!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. sreeMarch 23, 2010 at 10:47 PM

    @ The Terrific Lady.

    Thankx a lot..!! :-)

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  7. Anew BrainMarch 26, 2010 at 10:13 PM

    Really heart piercing to hear all these..

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  8. sreeMarch 29, 2010 at 5:58 AM

    @ Anew Brain.

    Yes. They are. And yet there are things which make our heart wreck..!!

    Thanks.

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  9. AmithMarch 29, 2010 at 8:50 AM

    Btw, let me ask you a question.

    What are you trying to bring out through this blog entry.?

    Sorry for being off-topic :D

    aMiTh

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  10. sreeMarch 29, 2010 at 8:53 AM

    @ Amith.

    Then I'm Sorry..!! And please do note that every one can't understand mutually..!! If so this world would not be so cruel & you may not ask such a question, even if its to kid me..!!?

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  11. AmithMarch 29, 2010 at 8:59 AM

    Oh, i didn't get what i was expecting.I should have been more precise over the same.

    Hmmm..Well to be frank,I know that You have posted this entry to get your views and thoughts exposed to the whole world.And since you're targeting a larger audiencem, you have got the responsibility to make sure that every one who reads get atleast some idea about what you have scribbled down here. Especially the one's who're very bad at lanuguages and literaute.

    I hope that you got the point. No offence intended.

    aMiTh

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  12. RajeelMarch 29, 2010 at 9:28 PM

    I'm really proud, in being your friend, sree - who tried to bringout darkness among us, into the penuries of our heart through your magical words. I really appreciate your word 'Caniballs'. It's really true ..... we are just humans , only in name - not in action

    But some words are very unfamiliar and i couldn't understand them. But, those words are really heart piercing !!

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  13. sreeMarch 29, 2010 at 10:03 PM

    @ Rajeel.

    Thanks a lot bro.. Yet I've left a hell unsaid..

    And I'm seriously working on my scribblings as per you brilliant people's as You and Amith, to make my posts simple..!

    Yet, i think & believe I've done things which are digestible..!!

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